I like how the story is going... but there are a few things that confused me. 1. How does Aladdin not recognize Thalia? It's been only 2 years. 2. You're spelling/grammar mistakes still need help. 3. Umm... Aladdin and Jasmine don't need to be "mushy", but it would help if they were closer. 4. Umm... action maybe? 5. C'mon, can't keep us waiting for the next chapter girl!!!! Well, other than that... it's great. I can't wait to read what happens next!

Author's Response: I'll try and Write with better gramma and all that stuff. But thanks for the reveiw

Author's Response: also u know the whole recondinsing thing it's been 4 years and whenever Aladdin sees thalia she has her riglety hair in a tight bun and she's wearing makeup. somthing that Aladdin never saw her in