Reviews For Revelations in the Sand
Reviewer: JasAndAlFan4ever Signed
Date: 10/27/13 - 02:25PM
Title: Chapter 11
Hi! This story was awesome! I read it all the way through last night! You had everyone in character! I was almost crying when I thought Jas had lost the baby and when I thought she was gonna die. You're an awesome writer! I can't wait to read more from you!