Reviews For Jealous Rajah
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
Date: 06/10/06 - 07:36PM
Title: Jealous Rajah
Very funny, but is it supposed to be written in a poetic (I guess) way? If not, I suggest cleaning up the grammar and punctuation.
Reviewer: chrissy Anonymous
Date: 04/08/06 - 08:47AM
Title: Jealous Rajah
ok.. not bad for a beginner!! but seriosly, but periods at the end of your sentences!! it was kind of hard to read, but i really liked it!!
Reviewer: Evangeline-Marie Anonymous
Date: 01/03/05 - 02:48PM
Title: Jealous Rajah
Great story.....the only problem is....THERE'S NO PUNCTUATION!!!!!!!!!!!