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We are the home of 167 authors from among our 746 members. There have been 2011 reviews written about our 530 stories. A special welcome to our newest member, Disneygirl19.
Reviewer: Becky Anonymous Date: 03/16/06 - 08:19AM Title: That's a Carpet! Or is it not?

Pretty good story next chapter please.

Reviewer: liz Anonymous Date: 01/23/05 - 01:08PM Title: That's a Carpet! Or is it not?

i can't wait to read your next chapter, your story is very orginal !

Reviewer: Tawnya Anonymous Date: 01/14/05 - 02:00PM Title: That's a Carpet! Or is it not?

i love your story!! please don't keep me in suspense

Author's Response: Oh goody a new reader!! :D Well thanks very much! And don't worry by monday I'll have the next chapter up. And it will be good I assure you!! Thanks so much again!! I am very glad to know I have people who really enjoy my story. Thatr make me have the strength to write more. So by this Moday I should have the next chapter up ( since there is no school tomorrow)!!

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Date: 01/08/05 - 12:25PM Title: That's a Carpet! Or is it not?

I have never seen Aladdin emotionally lost it was interesting to see him in that light. I am wondering how the story will end.

Author's Response: You will find out soon enough. You would probally be that way too if you lost the loves of your life and don't know if they are dead or alive? But really I have to go back to the oringnal way of doing him. As Mysticmeg told me his personality at that point is different. I hope I cleared up this mixup by making him more like his real character. But we must remenber that he is older now and have to look at the point view from a father's side. But don't worry I have changed him back to normal. He will now be more heroic from this moment on! And thank you Anna for your review it means alot to me to know that people actually read my fanfics. ~ Lydia

Reviewer: mysticmeg Anonymous Date: 01/07/05 - 03:37PM Title: Tears Of Hope

This story is turning out to be very dramatic, and I like that, but you're seeming to loose to much of Aladdin's correct persona. He seemed so serious and emotional, instead of ready for action. I'm liking how this story is shaping up, and I can't wait to see what happens! I hope that you keep up the good work in future stories.

Author's Response: Thanks meg it is always a pleasure to hear from you. But yes I did get a little too emotional in that chapter. But we must remenber how you would feel if you lost the ones you care about. He could be that way in a way. But don't worry he is back to his orignal ways. And I will try to stay more in character. Thanks again for your review meg!! *hugs* ~Lydia

Reviewer: Mary Anonymous Date: 01/06/05 - 09:53PM Title: His Girl Now

Your story is very original, I couldn't stop reading!

Reviewer: Lauren Anonymous Date: 01/06/05 - 02:31PM Title: Tears Of Hope

like what you've done with the story- i can't wait to see what will come up next!

Author's Response: Thanks Lauren I will have the next chapter in by friday! Today I have gymnastics so it I won't have time. But thank you very much for your kind words you are to kind!! :D

Reviewer: Mary Anonymous Date: 01/05/05 - 02:15PM Title: Tears Of Hope

great story so far! i am just waiting to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Oh good another reader!! I am so happy! Thank you very much for your kind words. No one could have spoken better. *laughs lightly* Thank you so much. I am glad you like my story. Don't worry the next chapter will be up soon.

Reviewer: Lauren Anonymous Date: 01/02/05 - 04:51PM Title: Young?

I love the story- please don't leave me in suspense and keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading my fanfic I am glad you like it!! And don't worry by tuesday I should have the next part up. But if you read the info on me I have gymnastics tonight so I don't have very much time to write the next chapter right now! But it will be up soon!! :)

Reviewer: mysticmeg Anonymous Date: 12/29/04 - 10:21AM Title: Young?

I really like how your story is unfolding Lydia. I can't wait for a conclusion or the next chapter. Your new characters have attained amazing personas, making them much like the original characters. I'm glad that you will fisnish this story, and please... don't keep me waiting!

Reviewer: Mysticmeg Anonymous Date: 11/23/04 - 04:04PM Title: Captured

I like this story so far. I don't like having to wait for the rest of it... lol... ::I'm one of those people who can't put a book down once she started reading it:: So, when I'm interested in something, I like to finish it. So far, it's great. The plot line is very original, and the characters are in the correct personas. It's short and to the point. Please, don't leave me hangin', I need to know the rest!!!

Author's Response: I just submitted the next part it should be up soon. Thanks Mysticmeg for being my first person to review my story, Believe me the next chapter is only another chapter in it. But you learn more about Astar in this one. I have tons more ideas and writting and typing to do. What has been helping me alot on getting it better is watching the movies, and tv shows. It helps me with getting the character right. And I've still got alot to do. Believe me I am writting the next story I'll do all at once. *winks*