I really liked the story and character of Myrna. Her interaction with Mechanikles was fun. The scene in which they got to know each other brought a grin to my face. :)

My only complaint is that the ending is a bit too rushed. I would have liked a little more development before they got married.

I don't know if you're active in this fandom anymore, but I hope you see this review sooner or later. If you see this, could you contact me? I have something I want to talk about but I've been unable to get a word to you.