Congraulations you will be the first to be graded by me A+ This is a great story I read it once many months ago Took er 3 days and night might read again someday your a great writer
Sad beautiful ending though.
Good sad emontional story about how they felt about eachother and there friendship was sweet.To many deaths of the characters thouh.
I liked this story a lot. I have read it many times and get a little different feeling about it every time. It is a little off with the characters but it is excellent for a first fanfic. I cried a lot during it... Overall, it's a good story.
Umm... I don't know what to really say about this story. It wasn't really like the Aladdin stories I'm used to. I fell in love with the characters, but you changed them some how. I guess from Iago's point of view, that's how you'd tell a story, but it just didn't stick. The personas of the characters were all off. I don't know, it was enjoyable and dramatic, but not a true Aladdin story.