Hi! I really liked this story! You had everyone in character! It was awesome! I can't wait to read more from you!
Hey, Girlie! I liked it a lot! The interactions between Aladdin and Jasmine were sweet and not mushy! There were times where I couldn't help but exclaim, "You go girlfriend!" ^_^ However, when Jasmine was making up excuses about the meeting with her father and about getting the water, I thought it was a bit out of her persona. Other then that, it was well though out and entertaining!
Author's Response: Thanks Meesh... I appreciate it. Yeah... I tried to make Aladdin the "damsel in distress" in this fanfic, but I may have lost some of Jasmine's attitude. She usually is quick and witty, and doesn't stumble with words. I think Aladdin and Jasmine switched personalities in this one!!!
This was an awesome fanfic! I loved the fact that Jasmine was in control...and it sent a message sayin that everybody needs somebody to hold on to! :D
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I tried... and it turned out alright. I skipped major plot images, and alot of things seemed confusing. Thanks for the review, I appreciate it greatly. See my next story, you may like it just as much, or even better.