Hey! This story was really enjoyable! It was also really suspenseful as well! I hated seeing Jasmine being abused by that jerk, but I'm glad she's back with Aladdin now.
Great story! When Rickeem knocked Aladdin over the balcony you really showed Cassim's love for his son the way he came out of hiding. I was thinking about making a sequel, giving you the credit for Rickeem and his falcon. You would get the credit for the reason it was made.
Author's Response: Thank you Cassim Fan! I\'m glad you liked it. Be on the look out for some new stories coming your way starring Cassim and Aladdin!
nicely don e for Cassmim, he isn't easy to do sicne he's only in one movie
Author's Response: Aw... thanks. I\'m glad that you think so. He was hard, but I did my best!
dialogue is excellent, characters are formed brillantly and the writing is creative and interesting!
well done!
Author's Response: Thank you diamond! I appreciate it more than you know!!!
Ooh.. Very suspenseful!
And I like Rickeem... Well actually no I don't. he's very naughty. But you know what I mean. He's well-portrayed.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like the villian's persona... he was a made-up on the whim character. I just hope he isn't a Mary-Sue.
Thanks Meesh!!! ::Hugs::
Awesome job on this one - sorry I've been so slow on reading this story! In this chapter, your strong point is how you succeed to really bring out Aladdin and Jasmine as a couple very well!
Author's Response: Thanks Meesh, I'm glad that you got to read my story!!! I'm glad that you liked it, and that you appreciate the work I did!
Good job Meg! I was worried there about Aladdin but you always have a happy ending!
Author's Response: Thanks Mariposa. Of course I have a happy ending, it makes it a good story!
Question for ya, how is it you have time to ready my stories, yet you won't write any of your own!!!??? C'mon girl, I want to read some of your stories!
wow..great isnt even the word to discribe your story,eventhough it toke long it was worth it.I have read all your stories can't wait to read another.
Author's Response: Thank you so much Jess. I'm glad that really enjoyed it. I should be writing sometime in the future... and thanks for reading my other stories also. It's a good esteem booster.
Great story! I loved it, and yeah you did get kinda slow at the end but thats okay because it got finished. I hope to see more stories by you soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked the story, and I'm glad that you held out until the end. I hope that it was worth the wait.... and new stories should be coming sometime in the future. I just need a rest after this one, and I'm done doing beta work for another writer.
Good chapter. I hope you finish the story soon!
Author's Response: Lol, well I finished tonight Rebecca. I hoped that you enjoy it!!!
This is the GREATEST story I have ever read...plllllllllleeeeeeeeaseeee finish it. I have to know what happens!!
Author's Response: I hate to keep you in suspense, I really do... but things have gotten in the way. I'm trying, I really am. Sorry...
I can't wait to read the rest,please finish soon.This is the best story I have ever read,I hope u write more stories like this soon.
Author's Response: Thanks Jess, and I'm glad that you are liking my story. I know it's been awhile since I updated it, but I'm trying to finish the next chapter. And soon the story will be finished. I hope you like my future and past stories as well. Thanks again. ~Meg
Please update!!!
Author's Response: I'm trying, I've been so busy. I am working on the next chapter though, so please be patient. I hope it's worth your wait!!! -Meg
Oh my gosh! This story is awesome! I love it! It is one of my favorites I have ever read! I am awed at how you protray the characters so well. That's something I have a hard time doing in my stories. I hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks alot Nikki. I really appreciate your review, and your positive comment. I'm glad that you like this story so much, and that I am writing one of your favorite ALADDIN fanfics. I am very appreciative of how you think I am doing the characters so well... that's something every author wants to hear. You do very well with characterization in your stories too. Keep writing, and thanks again.
U have to finish it's sooooo goood! i couldn't stop reading!!! u can write a story!
Author's Response: Thanks Natasha, I should have the new chapter up today or tomorrow... but I only have 1 or 2 more chapters to go. Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it... and I'm glad that you're entertained by my story.