Reviews For Princess of the streetrats
Reviewer: mysticmeg Anonymous
Date: 08/20/05 - 08:32PM
Title: Escape
Yeah! You finally updated... good chapter... but I wish it woulda been a bit longer.
Author's Response: soz about the legnth I just wanted to post it really soon. also the chapters will get longer it's just I was introducing all the charectors you don't know so thats pretty much the last of the intros!
Reviewer: Lizzie Anonymous
Date: 03/10/05 - 01:35PM
Title: The Genie
Please update soon cant wait for more ^_^
Reviewer: Mariposa79 Signed
Date: 02/18/05 - 12:22PM
Title: The Dream
Oh, yeah! I forgot! So what's going to happen next? I've noticed that you started on a new story That's seems pretty interesting too! Hope to read more1
Reviewer: Mariposa79 Signed
Date: 02/18/05 - 10:35AM
Title: The Genie
Yay! You made Genie turned to Mushu! Love it! Love It!
Author's Response: Hello!!! Mushu is like my fave disney charector outside of aladdin!!! ofcourse I had to include him!!! thanks for both reveiws!
Reviewer: Mysticmeg Anonymous
Date: 02/04/05 - 08:26PM
Title: The Genie
OMG!!! You do Genie wonderfully!!! I have never seen a story w/ such a good Genie persona. Great job!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!!! I was wondering wether I portrayed him properly and according to you I did it properly!! thanks again 4 the reveiw!
Reviewer: MysticMeg Anonymous
Date: 02/04/05 - 03:25PM
Title: Royalty
I like how the story is going... but there are a few things that confused me. 1. How does Aladdin not recognize Thalia? It's been only 2 years. 2. You're spelling/grammar mistakes still need help. 3. Umm... Aladdin and Jasmine don't need to be "mushy", but it would help if they were closer. 4. Umm... action maybe? 5. C'mon, can't keep us waiting for the next chapter girl!!!!
Well, other than that... it's great. I can't wait to read what happens next!
Author's Response: I'll try and Write with better gramma and all that stuff. But thanks for the reveiw
Author's Response: also u know the whole recondinsing thing it's been 4 years and whenever Aladdin sees thalia she has her riglety hair in a tight bun and she's wearing makeup. somthing that Aladdin never saw her in
Reviewer: Princess THalia Anonymous
Date: 02/02/05 - 12:47AM
Title: The Dream
u know it's funny 'cause thats exactly what the first reveiwer of my Harry potter Fan fic said. I'll try and make it a little better.
Reviewer: MysticMeg Signed
Date: 02/01/05 - 03:29PM
Title: The Dream
I like where this story seems to be going, and it is showing signs of a good plot line. I like the imagery you use... but again... I haven't seen much personality from the characters... so I can't judge there. What I can say is that you need to work on your typing. You have alot of errors, and even if the story is REALLY good... too many typing errors can make it unattractive and less good in the eyes of the reader.