Reviews For Arabian Cinderella
Reviewer: Meesh Anonymous
Date: 08/22/05 - 07:30PM
Title: The princess
I still it very much, and I like how you portray Princess Saphrina. She goes against stereotypical "wenches." I still like the servants as well. Thanks for the update! Keep it up!!!
Author's Response: Thanx I will!. Just one question. what is the steriotypical wench?
Reviewer: Meesh Signed
Date: 07/05/05 - 07:21PM
Title: the maid
I was just reading this again, and I have to say how much I enjoy even re-reading this chapter! The servants are so likeable! And they're hilarious! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: THANKYOU THANKYOU THANKYOU!!!!! sorry just your reveiw made me feel very happy!!!
Reviewer: Meesh Signed
Date: 07/05/05 - 07:19PM
Title: the sister
Hey, I still like your story! I can't wait to see how it develops! I know I really have NO ROOM to talk, but please update a lot more often! I really want to know where this goes! And I like how you're developing Nari. Just make sure that you don't make Jasmine too "stiff," if you know what I mean. Rememberhow carefree and spirited she is!
Author's Response: Soz I didn't mean to make Jas stiff. but I made her ike that in this chap because she was still annoyed at what Nari had done when she went into the city (I'm not going to tell you what she did though. I'll leave your imaganation to do that) any way next chappie she will be more free spirited. Besides kinda wanted to write her like, she has to be slightly strick but she doesn't want to be.
Reviewer: Meesh Signed
Date: 02/21/05 - 10:53AM
Title: the maid
Ooh. I like the characters very much! Their personalities or well-portrayed in their dialogue, and they keep my interest pinned to the story! ^_^
However, there are still many functional mistakes.
Author's Response: Hey thanx for the reveiw. Soz about the mistakes though, I'll try to fix them up, I've just had way to much school work and stuff so I was like half asleep when I wrote this stuff. But thanx any way!!!
Reviewer: Meesh Signed
Date: 02/21/05 - 10:48AM
Title: The prince
I like the story! The characters are lovable. And you foreshadow ver well/ But you have many run-ons and puncuation absences/mistakes to watch out for. Keep going!