I really liked your story-the ending was the best! The theme that love is much stronger than hate was very strong in your story.
I read this stroy the first time you put it on..reading it again made me feel great..i cryed again..lol..i really hope to read more of your stories...note to us spell cheek..lol
Hey! This was a great story, even though it had some spelling errors and stuff. I was really scared because of Jasmine dying. But it all worked out in the end.
Author's Response: Thanks alot for your review. I guess this story didn't get enough premiere time to be in the recent list. Thanks a bunch for taking the time to read it. I wanted to try a different ambience in this story. I'll try to watch out for my mistakes. ( heh heh. I need a better editor.) But be sure to read my other stories. You'll like them too!!
Wow... I can think of one word for this story: Intense. I really liked, above it's many sentence and spelling errors. I think it's quite good and well thought out. I cant' stand stories where Jasmine and Aladdin stay separated, and this one had me nervous. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks Meg! I was really nervous about this one. I had writer's block from connecting one scene to another. ( Filling those holes in between) Umm, thanks for pointing out my errors of my writing. I guess I had to pull out my old MLA mannual. If I can find it. Please leave a message in my contacts. I love to chat with you!