Reviews For Come What May
Reviewer: persian85033 Signed
Date: 10/27/05 - 04:53PM
Title: Homecoming
Great story. I like that one of Jasmine's old suitors is at the party.
Reviewer: lauren Anonymous
Date: 06/25/05 - 05:46AM
Title: Homecoming
i love the plot so far, you have a talent for suspense! keep up the great work!
Reviewer: Jess Anonymous
Date: 04/04/05 - 04:55PM
Title: Homecoming
loved the story.I like the way you write about how much Aladdin and Jasmine love eachother....you should write more
Author's Response: Thank you! I love the romance that goes between them. They should always be together and I'm keeping that way. But, I am working on another one. I'm doing research right now. It should be up pretty soon!
Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous
Date: 03/04/05 - 02:22PM
Title: Homecoming
Hey! That was an awesome story. It had a really good plot to it and all. Just watch the punctuation and you'll be fine!
Author's Response: Thank you Nikki. The story was adapted to the Moulin Rouge ( my favorite movie) but mines ended up happily. I hope that I'm allowed to do that since other stories out there are adapted to Shakespeare, movies and other fairy tale stories.
Reviewer: mysticmeg Anonymous
Date: 03/03/05 - 03:31PM
Title: Homecoming
I'm liking the plot line of this story. I like the dialogue alot, and the romance is just right. Although, you have TONS of spelling mistakes. You're using the wrong endings for words, over and over again... you change the tenses like 2 times in each sentence. It can confuse, and annoy people. Other than that, YOU GOT IT!
Author's Response: Thanks I'll keep editing to change my mistakes. Thanks for your review! I was worried that the romance was too mushy but I'm glad to you that it's just right.