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Reviews For The Final Fate
Reviewer: wondergirl100 Signed Date: 03/03/06 - 03:30PM Title: The Secret

awesome story! read mine...

Reviewer: sena Signed Date: 11/13/05 - 05:24AM Title: The Secret

I love the story! Please update soon!

Reviewer: Jess Anonymous Date: 10/31/05 - 07:09PM Title: The Secret

your killing me...lol...hope u update soon...its been a long time

Author's Response: I know right! Already got a new chapter up. Sorry for the wait!

Reviewer: Meesh Signed Date: 07/06/05 - 06:33AM Title: The Truth Revealed

Aww.. You make the interaction between Aladdin and Jasmine very sweet!

Author's Response: Thanx Meesh! : )

Reviewer: Mariposa79 Anonymous Date: 05/26/05 - 02:52PM Title: Painful Flashback

Good plot! I love the riddles that you put in. Very clever. Watch out for typos and mistakes. It was cool that you added the "series villians " in your story. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanx for your comments!

Reviewer: Meesh Anonymous Date: 05/26/05 - 01:02PM Title: The Secret

Very dramatic, which is a good thing. But try not to make it oveerly dramatic so much that the characters are out of their personnas! It's well-done so far!

Reviewer: Rebecca Anonymous Date: 05/24/05 - 04:23PM Title: The Next Adventure

Please update!!!!!

Author's Response: Don't worry I'm workin on it! I had a sudden computer crash!

Reviewer: Jocelyn Anonymous Date: 05/06/05 - 01:24PM Title: The Beast, the Battle

Great job so far! I like how it's coming along. :)

Author's Response: Thank you I really appreciate your comments, please stay in tune with this chapter, it's not finished.

Reviewer: Jocelyn Anonymous Date: 05/03/05 - 01:27PM Title: Jasmine's Fears

Great chapter. It's a little short though. Update soon! ;)

Author's Response: Thanx for the criticism! I'm working on it!

Reviewer: MysticMeg Signed Date: 05/02/05 - 05:16PM Title: Jasmine's Fears

Well, another very short chapter. I need somethin' more girlie... keep it going.

Author's Response: Well, I haven't gotten a chance to finish my draft of the story, so I've had to make it up as I go...sorry!

Reviewer: Jess Anonymous Date: 05/02/05 - 05:06PM Title: Jasmine's Fears

great story.I don't wont to stop reading it,u end the chapter to good...lol....hope u update soon

Author's Response: Thanx, Jess!

Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Date: 04/28/05 - 02:25PM Title: Beginning of the End?

I'm loving this story! You make the characters seem so alive! Update ASAP!

Author's Response: Thanx! I didn't realize that I was keeping some people in suspense!

Reviewer: Jwaa Anonymous Date: 04/25/05 - 05:57PM Title: Beginning of the End?

U have to update soon . your ending the chapters to good.hope you have another chapter or two in tomarrow

Author's Response: Thank you. Not to brag but can you believe that I'm making a 91 (B) in english? (middle school wise I'm mean)! Don't worry I'm working on the next three chapters

Reviewer: Jocelyn Anonymous Date: 04/25/05 - 03:28PM Title: Beginning of the End?

yeah I'm with meg on this one. make sure you update soon!

Author's Response: It's the riddles! Right now on my draft...they pretty much stink! I'm trying chica belive me I'm tryin' : )

Reviewer: Mysticmeg Anonymous Date: 04/25/05 - 03:08PM Title: Beginning of the End?

Oh, I hate short chapters!!! I'm thirsty for more chica! This chapter was very good, I like how you make the characters seem... get the next chapter up SOON!

Author's Response: Glad that you like it so far! Gurl believe I'm trying! It's so hard to come up with *good* riddles. The first riddle was a lucky break! :D