awesome story! read mine...
I love the story! Please update soon!
your killing me...lol...hope u update soon...its been a long time
Author's Response: I know right! Already got a new chapter up. Sorry for the wait!
Aww.. You make the interaction between Aladdin and Jasmine very sweet!
Author's Response: Thanx Meesh! : )
Good plot! I love the riddles that you put in. Very clever.
Watch out for typos and mistakes. It was cool that you added the "series villians " in your story. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanx for your comments!
Very dramatic, which is a good thing. But try not to make it oveerly dramatic so much that the characters are out of their personnas! It's well-done so far!
Please update!!!!!
Author's Response: Don't worry I'm workin on it! I had a sudden computer crash!
Great job so far! I like how it's coming along. :)
Author's Response: Thank you I really appreciate your comments, please stay in tune with this chapter, it's not finished.
Great chapter. It's a little short though. Update soon! ;)
Author's Response: Thanx for the criticism! I'm working on it!
Well, another very short chapter. I need somethin' more girlie... keep it going.
Author's Response: Well, I haven't gotten a chance to finish my draft of the story, so I've had to make it up as I go...sorry!
great story.I don't wont to stop reading it,u end the chapter to good...lol....hope u update soon
Author's Response: Thanx, Jess!
I'm loving this story! You make the characters seem so alive! Update ASAP!
Author's Response: Thanx! I didn't realize that I was keeping some people in suspense!
U have to update soon . your ending the chapters to good.hope you have another chapter or two in tomarrow
Author's Response: Thank you. Not to brag but can you believe that I'm making a 91 (B) in english? (middle school wise I'm mean)! Don't worry I'm working on the next three chapters
yeah I'm with meg on this one. make sure you update soon!
Author's Response: It's the riddles! Right now on my draft...they pretty much stink! I'm trying chica belive me I'm tryin' : )
Oh, I hate short chapters!!! I'm thirsty for more chica! This chapter was very good, I like how you make the characters seem... get the next chapter up SOON!
Author's Response: Glad that you like it so far! Gurl believe I'm trying! It's so hard to come up with *good* riddles. The first riddle was a lucky break! :D