Reviews For Aida
Reviewer: damonika Anonymous
Date: 02/17/07 - 10:23PM
Title: News
i like the story .it's one of the best stories i read on here.
Reviewer: Sebastian Humpert Anonymous
Date: 04/30/06 - 12:05PM
Title: News
If Jasmine came to my school on Awards Day, she would say 'Hello Boys and Girls'! :)
Reviewer: Sebastian Humpert Anonymous
Date: 04/23/06 - 08:55AM
Title: News
I think Jasmine and Aladdin finally got married when Aladdin was 20 years old. And if Jasmine knew the Chicago song "Hard To Say I'm Sorry", then I'd have have to ask her.
Reviewer: Sebastian Humpert Anonymous
Date: 03/27/06 - 03:36PM
Title: News
I'm a young man that's 17 years old. I'm as strong as Aladdin from Aladdin.
Reviewer: Sebastian Humpert Anonymous
Date: 03/23/06 - 04:11PM
Title: News
It would be so amazing if I stayed at home with Aladdin and Jasmine and my family was at church.
Reviewer: Becky Anonymous
Date: 03/12/06 - 05:49PM
Title: News
Pleeasse finish the story Oh I likee thee storry allot
Reviewer: Becky Anonymous
Date: 03/12/06 - 03:32PM
Title: News
Great story so far and his name is Rasul sorry I just felt like telling you that
Reviewer: Princess_Thalia Signed
Date: 06/11/05 - 07:09PM
Title: Preparations
Hio! this is a good plot line so far, but I'm having trouble seeing when the complacatin will take place. any way you should try a describe things a bit better for instance I have absoulutly no I dea what Aidia looks like or aunt Fara but keep up the good work!
Reviewer: Meesh Signed
Date: 06/07/05 - 08:49PM
Title: Preparations
Your plotline is very nice so far! Just a few things you should watch out for! One is quote confusion: at times I had a hard time figuring out who was talking. The second one is the persona's: I don't think it is much like Genie to throw anybody who wasn't trying to physical injure anybody out of the palace, and I doubt Iago would have been that soft when Aida returned. A third thing is that you should tell me a bit more about the characters!
I am very interested and I like it so far! Keep writing it!
Author's Response: I'll do that. I just didn't want to keep putting like ", said so-and-so, but I'll try to word it differently. Thanks.
Reviewer: Rebecca Anonymous
Date: 06/02/05 - 07:36PM
Title: News
I love this story! I read it at fanfiction.net. I hope to see more stories from you.
Reviewer: Nikki Signed
Date: 06/02/05 - 08:27AM
Title: News
Oh, what's with that Aunt Fara? I don't like her that much. I hope she let's her stay!