While the plot is extremely predictable, the ending is cute. I like how the sultan eats them. That's totally something I would imagine him doing! The story is kind of choppy; I would make it a bit indepth. And if it is to be told by Aladdin, it should be told in the first person. Please don't feel like I'm criticizing your work. I really did enjoy reading it! Keep writing, ~Meesh >