great story so far. i hope you continue to post it on here.
dang girl...you really have a knack for imagery, the language seems so natural and flows so effortlessly!
this story has captured my complete attention.
WOW! Im lovin this story!!
and when you mean prince of Persia do you mean the game cause I played the game and loved it! and the PoP has a woanderful sexy voice! You made this story soo real ..and its very unique ..UPDATE SOON!!!
~DB92
i love it! you have a skill for making it seem so real...and i've never read a story like this one before!
very different kind of story, i liked it. update soon!
BROVO!!!! LOVED THE STORY!!!! i hope you come out with chapters!!!
very nice, great amotions and a different sort of story!
Sorry about the last message i mean "hooked"...it a really good story,its a lot different from what i've been reading...please update soon....i can't wait to read more
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, Jess! You rock! I have tried to upload the first chapter to this story like, 666 times, and it won't let me. If you want, you can go to my webpage to read what I have put up so far. If not, you can also view it on FanFiction.net or you can send me your email address and I will email you the other chapters that I have writen. AH!! I hope you get this message! Again, I am soooo very sorry for the troubles!!
wow...u got me hocked..i hope u stay with this and write more stories like it..update ASAP