Reviews For Admittance
Reviewer: Suzunomiko Signed
Date: 03/01/05 - 09:13PM
Title: Admittance
YOU HAVE NO IDEA WHAT YOU"RE TALKING ABOUT! *yelling at the other reviewer* THIS IS PERFECT! IT HELPED INSPIRED MY FIC! *back to the author* Perfect, hun! I loved it, it was absolutely divine! I just wish I hadn't waited so long to review it... *pouts*
Reviewer: Meesh Signed
Date: 11/18/04 - 06:14PM
Title: Admittance
You probably put a lot of work into this story. But I think you could have portrayed the character's feelings with out all the rated R stuff. Real talent and creativity is displayed when someone can make something interesting with out putting things in it like that. Aladdin has always been and should always be kid-friendly. :-)