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We are the home of 167 authors from among our 746 members. There have been 2011 reviews written about our 530 stories. A special welcome to our newest member, Disneygirl19.
Reviewer: Disneygirl19 Signed Date: 09/23/15 - 07:48AM Title: Chapter 6

This is a great story!!I like all the drama!

Reviewer: ZahraOfTheDesert Signed Date: 04/06/11 - 10:36PM Title: Chapter 6

Congratulations, yours is the first story in a LONG time to make start crying so hard I had stop reading to clear my eyes. This story was amazing, grammar was very good, and everyone was very in character! Poor Al and Jas, things can never be easy for them can it? 10/10

Reviewer: Babygurl18 Signed Date: 08/07/06 - 12:07PM Title: Chapter 6

Honestly, I'm new to this whole Aladdin writting, and I saw all the tapes and series of Aladdin... But I really don't think Aladdin and Jasmine are in full character. I mean, It doesn't seem like this couple would be so... angry towoards each other. Not trying to make it look like a mean review.

Author's Response: I don\'t think you were being mean at all. But if u looked at the series,u know that this couple is known to have their share of arguments. The point is they love each other,but they do disagree,and the both have tempers,particularly Jasmine. The important thing is that they resolve their differences and stay together. Anyway,thank u for the review,and for being honest in ur opinion of the story,even though,to be honest,i don\'t really agree.

Reviewer: Miranda Anonymous Date: 06/10/06 - 06:33PM Title: Chapter 6

Hi. I was born pre-maturely, and I can relate to what Hazel is going through, right after birth. She/I both were small, skinny, and under ALOT of medication! Cool huh? Anyways, I absolutley loved the story, it was the first Aladdin Fan Fiction that I could actually and fully relate to! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks so much,Miranda! The sequel,If I Never Knew You,is up,so check it out! Hope you like Part Two as much as you liked Part One!

Reviewer: CD Anonymous Date: 05/14/06 - 02:18PM Title: Chapter 1

It was really good! I loved it!

Reviewer: Mia Anonymous Date: 04/14/06 - 03:39PM Title: Chapter 6

Great story!! My cousin Chrissy told me to read this story, and I'm glad I did!! I love it!!

Author's Response: Thanks! My sequel,If I Never Knew You, is up. If you get a chance please read it and let me know what you think.

Reviewer: chrissy Anonymous Date: 04/08/06 - 06:28PM Title: Chapter 6

Your stories are the best!! I am your #1 fan!! Hurry and put chapter one up!!

Author's Response: I\'m so glad you like it.Chapter one will be up in a few days,maybe a week or so,I promise!

Reviewer: chrissy Anonymous Date: 04/06/06 - 04:17PM Title: Chapter 6

your stories are the best!! i can't wait till the sequel!! you truly have what it takes to come out with your own aladdin stories!!! BRAVO!!!!!!!! i rate this story a 100!!!

Reviewer: chrissy Anonymous Date: 04/01/06 - 11:38AM Title: Chapter 5

that is the most emotional story about love i have ever read!!! I love it!!! Please make another chapter!! I wanna read about what happened to hazel!!!

Reviewer: Chrissy Anonymous Date: 04/01/06 - 11:09AM Title: Chapter 1

That was soo good!!! You have to make a chapter 2!! I'll be the first one to read it!! This story diserves to be published!!!!! Bravo!!

Reviewer: WIWJasmine Anonymous Date: 03/28/06 - 12:52PM Title: Chapter 5

That was so cool! Please Please Please Please Please put up the next chapter. I'm hooked!

Reviewer: Mariposa79 Anonymous Date: 03/24/06 - 10:14PM Title: Chapter 4

It nice to read that Al and Jas has problems and they have their fights. They are a normal couple But I know that you might have some your sleeve.- I was born a premature just about 3 months early. I was put in a incubator for 3 months. to keep me from infections and help me delevop more. Imagine in Al and Jas's time. It must have been horrifying. What miracle would bestow on Hazel?

Reviewer: senna1 Signed Date: 03/24/06 - 11:10AM Title: Chapter 1

I adore the story, i can't wait for the next chapters!

Author's Response: Thanks!A bunch of chapters have been put up since your last review.Please read,and let me know what you think!

Reviewer: Cece Anonymous Date: 03/22/06 - 06:33PM Title: Chapter 4

Finish pleeuz! i gotta know what happens next!

Reviewer: WIWJasmine Anonymous Date: 03/19/06 - 08:28PM Title: Chapter 1

That was so cool! I was absolutely intranced! Being a writer myself, it's sometimes hard to find something I can really get into, and I just LOVE Jasmine and Aladdin anyway, so that pulled me in from the start. Also, I always invisioned Jasmine giving birth to a girl, so that made me feel better about the story. Over all, it was great! Where's chapter 2?