WOW!!!! lol. oh this was absolutely AMAZING, i hope you know that! oh i loved loved loved the police chase, i couldn't stop reading!
oh and the part where aladdin and jasmine almost kissed again...ahh...lol.
and the ending was stunning, i HAVE to know what happens next!
i have nothing but applause for this chapter, it was beautiful :)
i am sooo glad you decided to update, perfect cliffhanger!
hey this story has some really great elements to it: love the idea that it brings aladdin and jasmine into our own time and the plot is very well done, how on earth did you think of it?! lol.
anyways bravo, i enjoyed reading it.
beautifully written.
oh my gosh! you have to finish this story! lol
but really i was hanging on every word, literally! i can't wait to see what happens next, and i love aladdin and jasmine so far- they are in perfect character. the plot is done very well- bravo!
keep up the great work :)
it's so amazing to imagine this story!
your style of writing is so beautiful and it has a real flow to it :)
again great chapter...i think this may be one of my favorite stories!
oh i really like this story so far!
it has so many complexities and i love the theme with love~ how two people were meant to be together, no matter what could come between them...this is really good!
Keep writing! The storyline is absolutely wonderful!
I can't believe the paparrazzi stoped them from kissing!!!! That was good
hey its mary(myspace)also AC. IM loving this story so much. GOsh so Romantic! they got closer..was hoping for a kiss.awww. but eww paparazi(sp?)I hate them a lot they ruined that momment.hope they get suied!good luck and hope that project of yours is a sucess!hope you UPDATE soon!
**mary**
Aw,that was SO romantic--and sad. Those damn paparrazzi always know how to ruin a good moment! lol!
Great job! Update soon!
I luv your story of how they go into the future
yay u put the BEP in here . i luv that song dont lie..I luv Venus! shes so funny wen shes bugging sadira. im so curious for the next chapter..im so interested in this story.i read all your fanfic so far and you make each and one of them so UNIQUE and not like everyother story and one thing for sure they best capture the love of al&jas.Cant wait till the next update!
Wow...that was awesome! I loved that you added BEP in there as a modern reference since they're one of my favorite bands EVER!!! And I'm glad Sadira is learning her lesson...to some extent.
Update soon!
Great chapter! That Sadira is one caniving little sneak!
My only advice to you would be more spacing in the paragraphs. Some of them were huge blocks of text that I could barely read.
Other than that,good job! Update soon!
I copied it to my HD, printed it and ranged to my most favorite stories' folder. The story is great! It's something that doesn't bore or annoy me, it's intriguing. I admire your imagination. I am almost your fan :)(as a writer, of course)