Reviews For A Father Betrayed
Reviewer: Gottapenname Anonymous
Date: 03/18/07 - 05:40PM
Title: Cassim's Discovery
What the heck was that.Where was the charecterperpesicve. Why is majority of the story in summary. All of stroy should bee in the story.The ending can you say chessey.When I mean chessey the cute kind I mean the kind tha'ts been growing molod in my firdge kind of chese.I would have given you lower rating but you give people a rating of -10
Author's Response: I\'m sorry if the story didn\'t mean your standards, but other authors liked it. I\'m also happy with how it turned out. I do apreciate your opinion, though.
Reviewer: Starz Signed
Date: 06/19/06 - 05:40PM
Title: Cassim's Discovery
I loved the part when Cassim came back to life!!! I loved the whole story!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, Starz. Yeah I just had to have him come back to life.