Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed
Date: 07/09/06 - 05:10PM
Title: Chapter 3: A Mysterious Meeting
Uh-oh.I think I know who the stranger was...and who he was talking to...but I'm not saying anything,just yet. Anyway,awesome chaper!
Reviewer: SweetApple Signed
Date: 07/07/06 - 02:00PM
Title: Chapter 2: A New Arrival
I can't wait for more chapters! this story is getting better and better.
Author's Response: lol thanks! i hope i can make the suspense even better!
Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed
Date: 07/07/06 - 11:40AM
Title: Chapter 2: A New Arrival
Yes!I'm lovin it! Things are definitely heating up...u used my suggestion perfectly! Update soon!
Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed
Date: 07/07/06 - 10:03AM
Title: Chapter 1: Losing You
Omg,you're making the sequel! I'm so excited! And I'm glad ur considering using my suggestions.I was literally tearing up while reading this chapter (yea,I know,I'm very emo). You express Al and Jas' emotions in such a natural way...I just love it!
Update soon!
Author's Response: thanks StoryWriter92~ lol i love your reviews- they are always so helpful :)