Hey there, great start! I would have liked a longer chapter but you've done well thus far. Is the sorcerer Mozenrath? I saw that in the story details you specified other.. but I'm just clinging onto the chance it might be him.
Sigh.. how I wish for a story where Jasmine ends up with him, instead of that "street rat". They look good together, no? ;)
Heh, well I can't wait to see what you come up with next so update as soon as you can!


Author's Response: thanks for the review assassin007, i\'ll try to update as soon as i can ;)