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Reviews For Arabian Cinderella
Reviewer: Meesh Signed Date: 02/21/05 - 10:48AM Title: The prince

I like the story! The characters are lovable. And you foreshadow ver well/ But you have many run-ons and puncuation absences/mistakes to watch out for. Keep going!