Reviews For The Test of True Love
Reviewer: sheena Signed
Date: 12/05/06 - 12:34PM
Title: Chapter 3- Desires of the Heart
uh rae al and jas married? I don't understand
Reviewer: sheena Anonymous
Date: 09/27/06 - 05:31AM
Title: Chapter 23: The End?
it was a good story!!I loved it!!!
Author's Response: thank you :) I always love support from my readers!
Reviewer: dazzeling diamond Anonymous
Date: 07/06/06 - 08:13PM
Title: Chapter 23: The End?
Just one thing: WRITE THE SEQUEL!
Author's Response: lol!! it would be fun...
Reviewer: SweetApple Signed
Date: 07/06/06 - 03:13PM
Title: Chapter 23: The End?
OMG THAT IS THE MOST KEWLEST STORY EVER..... Sorry I have not been on I was on Babysitting duty.... I HOPE YOU MAKE A SEQUEl.........also I love the ending it makes me want to read more!!!!
Author's Response: thanks!!! i appreciated all your great reviews :)
Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed
Date: 07/06/06 - 01:40PM
Title: Chapter 23: The End?
omg,U just have to write the sequel! I'll die if u don't! It was a wonderful ending,though. A sequel would be awesome because it fills in the little blanks here and there--I wanna here more about Jade...maybe even have her develop a crush on Aladdin! And even though Jasmine was rescued,she was still raped by Mozenrath,and that must have hit her hard.I'd like to hear how that affects her relationship with Aladdin in the future...
Anyway,these are just suggestions,and u don't have to use them if u don't want to.But I think a sequel would be great,and I'd defifinitely read it! :)
Author's Response: thanks storywriter92 :) i always enjoy your reviews. and i am thinking of a sequel, and if i do~ i will definitely think about your suggestions !
Reviewer: dazzeling diamond Anonymous
Date: 07/05/06 - 10:00PM
Title: Chapter 22: Take Me Away
yes, it was angsty, but I don't mind. at least ur one of the those people who admits it!
Author's Response: thanks for the review Dazzeling Diamond! I'm working on a new story, moving in a direction that's going to be less angsty then previous stories :)
Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed
Date: 07/05/06 - 01:51PM
Title: Chapter 22: Take Me Away
Don't worry,dear,I DO NOT hate you and you didn't go too far at all. I like that you hinted at what was going on instead of being too blunt. Update soon!
Author's Response: thanks~ i was a little worried there! lol
i didn\'t want it too graphic~ this way you know what happened, i had to tone down the imagery, but i guess it turned out alright :)
Reviewer: dazzeling diamond Anonymous
Date: 07/05/06 - 02:25AM
Title: Chapter 21: Darkness and Light
one word for you: UPDATE!
Author's Response: lol~ thanks for your review:)
Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed
Date: 07/04/06 - 10:34PM
Title: Chapter 21: Darkness and Light
And now things get interesting! Don't worry,ur doing fine! Yes,it's starting to get dark,but that doesn't bother me,because I've read WAY worse. Great chapter,as always! :)
Reviewer: dazzeling diamond Anonymous
Date: 07/04/06 - 06:27PM
Title: Chapter 20: Our Own Destiny
Oh no, I am having funny thoughts about this Jade girl...I hope she doesn't latch on to Al!
Author's Response: mmm...i\'m not going to say anything- just that there are a few surprises left for the gang.
Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed
Date: 07/04/06 - 12:56PM
Title: Chapter 20: Our Own Destiny
Nice.I like how ur building up the suspense!
I don't mind u going darker,if ur talking about what I think ur talking about--I say go for it. And as long as you don't get overly descriptive (and u don't seem like the type of person who would)the rating doesn't neccessarily have to go up. If it does get descriptive however,I don't have a problem with that either,and a higer rating wouldn't bother me in the slightest.
Author's Response: thanks- reading this was really helpful!!
mmm...i\'ll have to decide what i think i should do within the best interest of my readers...
Reviewer: dazzeling diamond Anonymous
Date: 07/03/06 - 07:09PM
Title: Chapter 19 : Torn Between Hope and Despair
I think the rating is fine...but if u have plans for anything more graphic or dark, then yeah, change it. Again this chap was great, as always, its a pleasure to read ur work!
Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed
Date: 07/03/06 - 12:30PM
Title: Chapter 19 : Torn Between Hope and Despair
Love it,as always!
As for the rating,PG-13 is fine--it's a bit sad in places,but nothing that qualifies it for a higher rating.
Anyway,great chapter. Update soon!
Reviewer: dazzeling diamond Anonymous
Date: 07/02/06 - 05:30PM
Title: Chapter 18: Unspeakable Consequences
Excellent! I can't believe Mozenrath...then again I can, after all he is a villain! Ur AlJas moments are lovely as always, and I am very curious coz I am guessing there is something up ur sleeve with the new girl, Jade...look forward to more updates, and I hope ur jaw feels better!
Author's Response: Thanks again :) my jaw is fabulous ! ^.^ I always like a plot twist lol :) hope to do some more writing soon!
Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed
Date: 07/02/06 - 12:07PM
Title: Chapter 18: Unspeakable Consequences
Oh boy...things just got interesting. I'm still wondering just what Moze wants to do to Jas,and Jade could cause some problems...
I hope u get well soon,and I'm glad the updates are coming so quickly! :)
Author's Response: awww...thanks!! it really has been a joy writing this story!!