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Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed Date: 07/02/06 - 11:46AM Title: Chapter 17: A Change In Command

Oh,no! Poor Al! Please let him be okay! And I shudder to think what Mozenrath is going to do to Jasmine...great chapter,as always. Update soon!

Reviewer: senna1 Signed Date: 07/02/06 - 07:39AM Title: Chapter 16: Promises To Be Made

i don't think there are words to express how good your story is! OMG!!!! LOVE IT!!!!

Author's Response: u r really too kind!!! but thanks for the reviews- it really adds to my confidence as a writer! :)

Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed Date: 07/01/06 - 09:13AM Title: Chapter 16: Promises To Be Made

Love it! I like angst,so the darkness of this chapter was great,and I like the forshadowing ur using. Update soon!

Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed Date: 06/30/06 - 07:28PM Title: Chapter 15:This Isn’t Forever

That. Was. AWESOME!!!!!! Very emotional,totally teared up at the end. Update soon!

Reviewer: Starz Signed Date: 06/29/06 - 10:32AM Title: Chapter 14: Nothing More to Lose

I was blown away by the part when Jasmine gave herself to Mozenrath!! I Really Liked it!!

Author's Response: oh thanks- hopefully it wont take long for the next chapter to come up! glad u liked it!!

Reviewer: Yum Anonymous Date: 06/28/06 - 11:07AM Title: Chapter 14: Nothing More to Lose

OMG THIS WAS AAAAMMAZING!!!!!!!!!11 im like a major fan of aladdin and it takes some effort to write as descriptively as you do omg im absolutely loving PLEASE dont stop writing i need you to post the next chapter...I NEED TO KNOW lol.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: thanks yum! reviews like this really help me! i hope the next chapter will not disappoint!!

Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed Date: 06/27/06 - 05:58PM Title: Chapter 14: Nothing More to Lose

Damn,girl,u update fast! I can tell you have this story planned out well,to be able to update so quickly.

Excellent job so far! Update soon!

Author's Response: lol, i cant explain it, but the story just comes to me, i just write what i think up. plus its easier when i can write shorter chapters and update sooner, rather than longer ones. even for me this story is surprising-im glad u like it!

Reviewer: dazzeling diamond Anonymous Date: 06/27/06 - 05:42PM Title: Chapter 14: Nothing More to Lose

cliffe! grrrr, no, lol, UPDATE!!!!!

Author's Response: sorry, i just had to add another cliffhanger, build up the suspense ya know. but im glad u like it, i guess that means i just have to make the next chapter even better!

Reviewer: dazzeling diamond Anonymous Date: 06/27/06 - 05:41PM Title: Chapter 13: Sacrifice and Loss

BEAUTIFUL! so sad, nearly cried!

Author's Response: gosh...i guess that\'s a good thing? yeah the story is definitely going to get more and more darker and complex as it progresses! but i wont say any more.

Reviewer: dazzeling diamond Anonymous Date: 06/27/06 - 05:40PM Title: Chapter 12: Here and Now

sorry, couldn't be bothere logging in! I loved the aljas moment, it was beautiful! Also love ur dramatic language, really gives the story a vivd feel.

Author's Response: thanks, i hope the next chapter to come will be just as good!

Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed Date: 06/27/06 - 11:59AM Title: Chapter 13: Sacrifice and Loss

Oh,God...I'm litereally tearing up.That was absolutely beautiful!Update soon!

Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed Date: 06/27/06 - 11:59AM Title: Chapter 13: Sacrifice and Loss

Oh,God...I'm litereally tearing up.That was absolutely beautiful!Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks StoryWriter92! :) It's an amazing feeling knowing that stories can connect to the readers this much XD I really appreciate it! :)

Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed Date: 06/26/06 - 02:06PM Title: Chapter 12: Here and Now

Yay,two updates in one day! I really like this chapter,very sentimental,and I know I've said it before,but Al and Jas are SO in character I can picture everything they are saying and doing!

Wonderful job! Update soon!

Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed Date: 06/26/06 - 11:01AM Title: Chapter 11:The Battle to Be Fought

Great chapter! You describe Aladdin and Jasmine's emotions very well,and I love how you use all this great foreshadowing--it adds so much more to the story.

Update soon!

Reviewer: SweetApple Signed Date: 06/26/06 - 10:42AM Title: Chapter 1:The Calm before the Storm

I am sooo into this story right now!!!! Update soon!!! As for my story I have been a bissy Bee latly so never enough time to right it... Awsome STORY UPDATE SOON AND I WILL KEEP REVIEWING!!!!