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Reviewer: dazzeling diamond Signed Date: 06/20/06 - 08:30PM Title: Chapter 10: Let Fate Decide

OMG! UPDATE! What is she gonna do...u've got me wondering!

Reviewer: dazzeling diamond Signed Date: 06/20/06 - 08:21PM Title: Chapter 9: Prisoners of the Most Unlikely Sort

the language you use is so beautiful and mesmerizing, great work!

Author's Response: :) Thanks very much Dazzeling Diamond! I hope my work continues to be the same way! Appreciate all the encouraging reviews you've given me! :)

Reviewer: dazzeling diamond Signed Date: 06/20/06 - 08:20PM Title: Chapter 8: No Turning Back

awesome, i can't wait to see waht happens next! and sorry for the late review!

Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed Date: 06/19/06 - 11:31AM Title: Chapter 10: Let Fate Decide

Oh,God,another cliffhanger! Grrr! I want to know what Jas' plan is! Very romantic moments with Al and Jas,so subtle and well done. Can't wait for your next update!

Reviewer: SweetApple Signed Date: 06/17/06 - 06:28PM Title: Chapter 9: Prisoners of the Most Unlikely Sort

He got the sultan I am going to have to see what is going to happen. Update soon!!!!

Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed Date: 06/17/06 - 10:32AM Title: Chapter 9: Prisoners of the Most Unlikely Sort

Oh dear...we've got problems! I HATE Mozenrath SO much! He can't get away with this!

Update soon!

Reviewer: Desertbloom92 Anonymous Date: 06/16/06 - 05:29PM Title: Chapter 8: No Turning Back

I love the way you write. Everything you make seem so real!YOu capture al&jas perfectly! UPDATE SOON!I really am intrested in this story. your doing GREAT!

Author's Response: gosh reading this made me smile!!! thanks for all ur great feedback.

Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed Date: 06/16/06 - 01:07PM Title: Chapter 8: No Turning Back

Wow...you're really awesome,you know that? You're writing style is simply beautiful,and you portray Al and Jas perfectly.

Update soon!

Author's Response: im blushing***really. ahhh...reading this made my day. thanks again for ur review!!

Reviewer: DesertBloom92 Anonymous Date: 06/10/06 - 01:11PM Title: Chapter 7: The Beginning of the End

im likeing this story so far. You were very good at decription and you made it very realistic.Word choice was perfect. Like I said the personalities matched each of the characters.I love your work

Im defenity looking forward for the next update!


DB92

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Author's Response: Thanks DesertBlook92 :) It helps to get feedback like this from readers. Hope u enjoyed the story!

Reviewer: dazzeling diamond Signed Date: 05/31/06 - 04:26PM Title: Chapter 7: The Beginning of the End

Aw, that was great! Beautifully written, and great cliffe. U've successfully captured Al and Jas' feelings too, bravo!

Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed Date: 05/30/06 - 02:00PM Title: Chapter 7: The Beginning of the End

UPDATE SOOOON!
Great chapter! I'm still in shock...no idea what's going to happen,but I guess that's a good thing,right?

UPDATE SOOOON!

Reviewer: Amadou Anonymous Date: 05/29/06 - 01:26PM Title: Chapter 6: Lost Hope?

Please, don't let him break her heart! I could not stand it...:`(

Reviewer: mustangsaxy Anonymous Date: 05/22/06 - 12:50PM Title: Chapter 6: Lost Hope?

Omgosh! This is one of the best fanfics I've ever read. You are very good at describing people's emotions. I love Jaz/Moz stories like this! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much Mustangsaxy :) reviews like yours make writing so rewarding! Hope u liked the rest of the story :D

Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed Date: 05/21/06 - 06:15PM Title: Chapter 6: Lost Hope?

Great chapter. You describe Aladdin and Jasmine's emotions perfectly,and I like the angle you're going for with Mosenrath.

Update soon!

Author's Response: thanks StoryWriter92- i appreciate the reviews!! i\'m glad you like the story so far

Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed Date: 05/08/06 - 09:39AM Title: Chapter 5- Losing What Matters Most

Oh, this is getting interesting! Luv the dialouge between Al/Moze and Jas/Moze. Very believable. Update soon!