Great chapter!
I'm sorry I haven't been reviewing quicker, I've been really busy with my own fic and school!
Great, I can totally visualise it in my head, and when I can do taht with someone's story, it's definitely good!
Author's Response: thanx- yeah finals for me are coming up so i\'ll see how that goes...
hopefully this summer i\'ll have time to work on my stories!
I love the story, please update soon!!!!
Wow, great chapter! You really know how to build up the suspense! Update soon!
Hey there. This is a great story. I definitely think that you should finish it!
Wow, love it so far! Your AlJas moments are great and Moze is very in character. Update soon!
Nice story, Update soon!
I love the story so far!! Please make chapter 3!!
Love the story so far.Everyone's in character,and you left a great cliffhanger in your last chapter.Pleas update soon!
Love the story so far.Everyone's in character,and you left a great cliffhanger in your last chapter.Pleas update soon!
nice chemistry between al and jas!
love the first chapter is was soo sweet! but u gotta whip up another chapter or two for me! its good so far
A good beginning. It will be interesting to see what's awaiting them.
Very nice intro.Please update soon!