Great story!!I love all the drama and love!I went to your fanfiction profile though,and i couldn't find the pictures of Hazel.
OMG, I absolutly love this story! Please Please Please Update!!!!
hi. i can relate to what hazel is going through in this situation. i just found out that my boyfriend was just my boyfriend out of pity. not that that is what happened to hazel and hakim's relationship. did that make any sence in the least? ah, well. still, my heart aches now from the way he treated me. pity is a bad reason to play someone's girlfriend, no?
LOL I can't Wait till the next chapter! I wonder if Hazel Will stop the wedding I mean I want Hakim and Hazel to be together. ^_^ Well It is the best story I have seen!!!!!!!
i LOVE it. the imagery is so realistic and i love that you added Evanescence~ i adore their music ;)
only one more thing:
update soon! lol
Dear storywriter92,
I just read a review I written to you, but I SWEAR I didn't write that!! My 15 year old sister, Maya, got a hold of my password and wrote that! She confessed to me yesterday. I am sooo sorry, and I hope you belive me, because I would NEVER in a million years say this story pisses me off!! I love your stories, and you are a woundeful writter! I hope I ((SHE)) didn't get you upset...
Starz
first of all, where in the hell did hakeem get the selfish thought of cheating on hazle?! These kinds of stories pisses me off!!
It remindes me how my EX- boyfriend left me... a straight up bull faced lying CHEATER!!
oh wow where on earth do i begin? lol
~it was so REAL, i could swear i could see the story just come to life! you know it just has to be great when you reach out to your readers!
anyways... the story is smart, strong, and real, and i can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thank u so much! I know it\'s taking me a long time to update,but hopefully a new chapeter is coming out soon!
please update soon!!
This chapter is sooo goood that i read it over n over again!!!! But i have a song i wanna suggest called 'I'm a Survivor' By Destiny's Child!! 'Cause Hazel's a 'Soldier' LOL!!!!! Can't wait 4 ch:13!!
Hey!! U and those other authers Sweet Apple and Starz R my Favorite!!! Ya'll all should make a story 2gether!!! Shoot, that would B somethin' 2 read!!!
gosh, after reading this i swear i could feel all the emotions from the characters- it made me think of experiences ive dealt with-errr...how could he cheat on her?
lol,
but u had me hanging on every word!
Author's Response: Wow,thank you!I\'m glad u like it so far,and that you could relate to the characters,it\'s one of the best things a writer can hear! Chapter 13 is coming soon! :)
Hey!
I finished it! Now I'm going to be one of those people who begs you to KEEP GOING! Lol, I really liked it... and can't wait to see what developments you decide on.
Much Love,
Meg
Hey! I only got this far in the story before I had to quit, but I REALLY LIKE IT SO FAR! Haha, I told you I'd read it... and I will keep up with it.
The songs are a nice touch, like you said. And I like all the ways your story is going, keeps us from getting bored.
Much Love,
Meg
Author's Response: Yay,you read some! I can\'t wait until you read more,LOTS of drama coming up! lol
Ttyl!
jackie
Wow! I loved this chapter!! The song was an excellent choice to put in this chapter!! BTW: tell dazzeling diamond the pictures are beautiful!!! Update soon!!