Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed
Date: 07/13/06 - 09:08PM
Title: Chapter 13: Deceit and Lies
Oh,God...what a jerk! I hate him! Update soon! If he hurts Al...there'll be hell to pay!
Author's Response: lol- i guess it\'s good that you hate him-that means he\'s a good villian! :)
Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed
Date: 07/13/06 - 01:30PM
Title: Chapter 12: A Change in Sides
Ooh,nice cliffhanger! And anyone who could fake liking a guy like that has guts! Jasmine's just awesome! This is one of the first fics I've ever read where she really kicks ass and defends herself. It's just wonderful! Update soon!
Reviewer: SweetApple Signed
Date: 07/13/06 - 10:07AM
Title: Chapter 11: What the Heart Desires
Has Jasmine gone mad she can't go to the darkside AHhhh. LOL I luv it soo far.. this is my first time doing this....@>---@>------Roses for being so good at wrighting
Author's Response: lol-thanks SweetApple!
glad to hear :)
Reviewer: SweetApple Signed
Date: 07/13/06 - 10:07AM
Title: Chapter 11: What the Heart Desires
Has Jasmine gone mad she can't go to the darkside AHhhh. LOL I luv it soo far.. this is my first time doing this....@>---@>------Roses for being so good at wrighting
Reviewer: SweetApple Signed
Date: 07/13/06 - 10:05AM
Title: Chapter 11: What the Heart Desires
Has Jasmine gone mad she can't go to the darkside AHhhh. LOL I luv it soo far.. this is my first time doind this....@>---@>------Roses for being so good at wrighting
Reviewer: Desertbloom92 Anonymous
Date: 07/12/06 - 10:42PM
Title: Chapter 9: The Royal Stone of Fire
exactly! ..Finnaly some weakness and hope!
~DB92
Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed
Date: 07/12/06 - 09:57PM
Title: Chapter 9: The Royal Stone of Fire
Oooh...more drama! Finally weakness! Update soon!
Author's Response: lol- yes and there\'s more coming :)
Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed
Date: 07/12/06 - 09:56PM
Title: Chapter 8: Enemies Become Allies
Oooh,juicy stuff! :)
Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed
Date: 07/12/06 - 09:47PM
Title: Chapter 7: Every Man’s Weakness
Omg...I love it.Nothing else to say.Gotta read the next chapter!
Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed
Date: 07/12/06 - 08:42PM
Title: Chapter 6: Conquer the World
GO JAS!!! KICK SOME BAD GUY BUTT!!! lol
Ruini really creeps me out,but since he's the villian,I guess you can consider that a compliment.I find him very beleiveble and even a little frighting! Can't wait to see where ur going with this! Update soon!
Author's Response: lol- yeah it\'s about time i had her fight back -seeing what i put her character though!!
thanks :)
Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed
Date: 07/12/06 - 07:17PM
Title: Chapter 5: Something You Don’t Own
Poor Jas! u love to torture,don't u? lol
But I really like Ruini--he's the guy u love to hate! And I know he's planning something big...
Update soon!
Reviewer: Desertbloom92 Anonymous
Date: 07/12/06 - 11:36AM
Title: Chapter 2: Our Own Devices
YESSSSSSS!!!you made another sequel.I absolutly LOVE your past two story!call me a fan!they were amazing.and you wernt predictable.and what I like is you update fast!not waiting like months for an update ..but all is soo worth it.Cant wait for that update ( Iknow it wont take long)
~DB92
Author's Response: thanks! it\'s always nice to hear that my stories are good lol
thanks again for the review!
Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed
Date: 07/11/06 - 07:47PM
Title: Chapter 1: A New Beginning
omg...another sequel! It's like a summer miracle! So didn't see this coming! Can't wait for an update! :)
Author's Response: lol! i only hope it will be better than the last!