Your story is really good so far!! Keep the chapters commen!!
Author's Response: lol~ hey thanks for the review :)
What a cruel thing!! I have to read the next chapter! lol. Great story so far!!
Author's Response: thanks Starz! reviews like this really encourage me to write more :)
Uh, just a questionare Aladdin and Jasmine the parents of Laurel?
Author's Response: oh no~ sorry for the confusion. laurel is from another kingdom, but that will be explained in the next chapter, right now aladdin and jasmine don\'t know about her...but i hope that it will make since in chapter 2!
Wow...a very strong beginning. I felt like I was right there with Laurel the whole time! And best of all,u left me wondering what's going to happen next.
Update soon!
Author's Response: thanks Storywriter 92~ definitely what an author likes to hear! lol