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Nez Eccentric Papyrus Jockey
Joined: 07 Oct 2004 Posts: 2617 Location: Bellevue, Ne
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xfkirsten Royal Vizier
Joined: 17 Jul 2004 Posts: 1309 Location: San Diego, CA
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Posted: Thu Oct 07, 2004 10:33 pm Post subject: |
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Off to a good start! I'm always glad to see Mozenrath stories.
BTW, The Bellevue you're from... is that Bellevue, WA, by any chance? I grew up there. _________________ I don't need intelligent drugs, because I don't know what they are. But I will put anything into my mouth that is given to me, whether it's supposed to go there or not. Because... I'm different. |
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Calluna Genie of the Messageboard
Joined: 14 Jul 2004 Posts: 3692 Location: Where the wind comes sweepin' down the plain.
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Posted: Fri Oct 08, 2004 6:22 am Post subject: |
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I thought the Eden and Dahndi scene was really cute. You've really got Eden's voice down. I wasn't sure what the story was meant to signify until I saw Mozenrath was in it...
PS - Or Bellevue, NE? Very close to here... |
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Nez Eccentric Papyrus Jockey
Joined: 07 Oct 2004 Posts: 2617 Location: Bellevue, Ne
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Posted: Fri Oct 08, 2004 7:17 am Post subject: |
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Thanks. Working on the next chapter. I really never seen enough fanfics about Eden and Dhandi. They had a lot of potential to be awesome characters, even though they had like only two episodes.
FYI- I am in Bellevue, NE. Maybe I should have specified in my profile. |
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Calluna Genie of the Messageboard
Joined: 14 Jul 2004 Posts: 3692 Location: Where the wind comes sweepin' down the plain.
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Posted: Fri Oct 08, 2004 2:55 pm Post subject: |
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Well, holy crap! Before I edited my profile it used to say Omaha. |
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Nez Eccentric Papyrus Jockey
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Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2004 12:16 pm Post subject: |
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Chapter two is now up! |
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Nez Eccentric Papyrus Jockey
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Posted: Fri Oct 15, 2004 8:59 pm Post subject: |
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Third Chapter is up! Read and review please! |
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Nez Eccentric Papyrus Jockey
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Posted: Wed Nov 03, 2004 8:58 am Post subject: |
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Fourth chapter is up! _________________
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Nez Eccentric Papyrus Jockey
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Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2004 1:46 pm Post subject: |
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Chapter five! _________________
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Princess Lydia Elemental
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Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2004 5:38 pm Post subject: |
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Oh it is a good story so far I can't wait till you do the next chapter! It is pretty confusing on what Mozenrath has done to Dhandi? Wow it is going to be a great story when you are done!! I can't wait for the next chapter keep up the good work!! |
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Nez Eccentric Papyrus Jockey
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Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2004 8:52 pm Post subject: |
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Don't worry. It'll all be explained eventually. _________________
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Princess Lydia Elemental
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Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2004 10:23 pm Post subject: |
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Okay! Keep me posted on when you get the next part up!! Thanks! |
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Nez Eccentric Papyrus Jockey
Joined: 07 Oct 2004 Posts: 2617 Location: Bellevue, Ne
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Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 5:31 pm Post subject: |
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Question: Any thoughts on how old Dhandi is?
I figured that she was eight years old when she and Eden first appeared in the series, so in about the time of her second appearance, she's eleven or ten.
Working on the story. Will post when chapter is up. _________________
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Princess Lydia Elemental
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Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 5:42 pm Post subject: |
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Great I can't wait!! |
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Salukfan Tiger-Clawed Thief
Joined: 18 Jul 2004 Posts: 1991 Location: Butler, PA
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Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 7:00 pm Post subject: |
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I figured that she was eight years old when she and Eden first appeared in the series, so in about the time of her second appearance, she's eleven or ten. |
Well, if her second appearance was a year after her first one, she would be nine. _________________ "This cow's been covered with flour!" |
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